InsightfulPerv says:

This is kinda dumb but what do you expect from a hentai? Guess I asked for it in the end by sticking through with such a ridiculous show. Can’t there be hentai where the women don’t seem completely brainless even before they are made into sex slaves. I mean, after episode 1, and the fact that the other warriors/princesses knew what was going down, one could have at least thought that they would put their heads together and make a plan of action. The point being, they unite as allies that they already were to face the threat. But apparently even the high elf was too stupid to gather all her allies together and at least make an organised defence line against Volt. Win or lose, at least that would have been much more interesting than her waiting for Volt to subjugate all her allies and reach her doorstep.

Secondly, for such a group of warriors and powerful figures, they could have at least had some more protective armour/clothing when they were going against their enemies. What the heck were the dark elves thinking, making deals with humans (whom they looked down upon) while being practically in the nude. IMO it would have been way more interesting seeing properly dressed protagonists. Granted it would be more fun tearing those clothes off and tearing away at their dignity if you are Volt. But the creators had to settle for the slutty look yet even then, they have the guts to claim that those women had dignity, and some were even virgins. BULLSHIT!!!

This clearly is why hentai and good storytelling will never mix. When you see what was a great concept at the beginning getting literally raped to the such brainless standards it’s rather sad. Yet why can’t one desire a hentai with a decent story, why can’t the so called artists and writers of this shit raise their standards? I mean, why even bother with such a setting if all that’s gonna happen afterwards has no sense whatsoever. I would have liked to see the girls at least put up a decent fight, like really fight like their lives depended on it. Here it just seemed like once captured, they no longer seemed to care for what happened to them. No resistance, not even a little, I would have thought with so many dicks poking at them, there could have been at least a few horny fucks who get their dongs bitten off. And what’s funny is that the genre is called pseudo rape! Lol, that’s rather funny cause all the girls in the end actually wanted it. At least they were willing enough to freely offer blows to the men while they were being supposedly raped. I guess after all hentai is just another wimpy genre of anime, too afraid to explore the reality of the ideas they are exploiting. This could as well have started with all the girls individually in an interview talking about how they were curious to on some sort of sexual adventure and consenting to this ridiculous roleplay. In the end, that’s what the whole anime looks like, a roleplay of some sluts wanting to be fucked their brains out from the beginning to the end. The high elf was the worst of them in this regard, though she’s meant to be the proper goodie while the dark elf would have been the not so innocent anti-hero/baddie.

The high elf lacked character, she was just too quick to give up and didn’t seem as ‘pure’ as she was supposed to be. But ain’t that a surprise since nothing about the way she was dressed stated otherwise. Her outfit was the most ridiculous of them all, and to think for a goddess…. perhaps she was a sex goddess, in which case she didn’t really mind the turn of event. Perhaps it’s what she wanted from the beginning. That could be it, because she was too passive and rather too eager to let Volt have his way with her. Nothing about her character was interesting besides her oversized booty and boobs.

Granted if I would ever consider myself a hentai storyteller, (Or perhaps I should rather stick to seinen.) I would do a lot of things differently. Firstly, I would have made a powerful dark elf exactly that, powerful and sinister. She would have taken out at least most of the dogs with her before she got broken, but of course struggle does not look pretty at all, which is why the makers rather made the main characters too easy to amuse to the point where the men were rather OP. Ologa would and Chloe would have put up a much bigger fight, (Chloe probably not as much since she was already bound). Ologa with the pride she had, she would have fiercy chomped on anything that went into her mouth causing the worst kind of death for a villain. Volt and his men would then probably have had to beat her into submission, wear her out till she had no more fight in her. At least then, this wuss-flick would finally satisfy it’s genre type. Why is it that they have to enjoy it, lol this show among most other hentai give the most shallow depiction of a female being.

It would probably be a culprit to those pervs who end up actually believing that a woman is that easily pleased. What would have been more interesting is if after they have worn her out, they would then give her a little time to breathe before they would continue with the torment. And I mean, not just gangbanging her, I mean skillfully pleasing her and forcefully making her reach an orgasm even as she tries to resist. She would then eventually come to her absolute humiliation, but that wouldn’t mean that she suddenly wants to be fucked all the time. It would simply mean her pride and self confidence has been tarnished and the process of desecrating her character would continue. (It’s not just subjugating the body, but the mind, and that is a slow process.) A simple threat towards the life of her subordinate would be enough to keep her in place to prevent anymore unfortunate circumstances (That is if she even cared for Chloe’s well being, though it didn’t really seem like she had any care or even slight concern as she saw her loyal subordinate being dragged away in a crazed state.) Anyway, assuming she did care and probably showing a bit of concern for Chloe would have been good, thus she would try to endure all she can so that her subordinate doesn’t end up like all the others who were killed. (Apparently they are the only ones left, everyone else got killed.)

She would then eventually fall from grace as the torments become routine and after having been made to partake in such humiliating practices, she finally becomes submissive and allows them to have their way with her. Granted, at this point, she’s even enjoy some of it (gradually enjoying more and to some extent, even secretly desiring more). At that point in my concept Ologa would be in denial, she still wouldn’t fully condone what is done to her. (What makes this genre patronizing is how women can easily become so shameless in how they want to be fucked. ) Pride, as a Queen is something she should have through out, sure it’d be tarnished and reduced but it should still remain to some extent, only in the end she has some sort of acceptance for what has happened to her.

I would have given Ologa a chance to try and escape countless times, sometimes even get back at her dominators. Though the events would get less and less. That to me is simply an example of how this could have been done. It would show great progression and slightly more accurately show the torment each of the girls would have had to go through, not to mention more instances of great sex scenes. I however guess hentai is is just too brainless for that, perhaps this is a case of me taking what would have been an interesting concept too seriously and nearly forgetting that this in fact was a hentai, (and besides some of the sex scenes which were pretty good) it was a pretty lousy hentai.

Oh, yeah and finally what would have been great was to see the interactions between the female captives. Whether plotting some form of escape, or just sharing their anguish and trying to comfort each other. It’s really disturbing how the girls in this anime seem to lack that ability. They wanted to fight against the threat alone and as a result they lost big time. Also a rescue, internal or external would have further raised the bar on my score imo. Even if it doesn’t succeed, it would have been cool to see some guys actually getting outraged at such treatment of the women they once looked up to as their leaders. I mean, I’m rather offended that the makers of this hentai (and most hentai anime) seem to like to portray men as brainless pervs who just want to get off.

Now that I have given my thoughts, imo this along with pretty much all hentai’s I’ve seen so far, I give no more than 5/10. This series in fact I give 3 for the reasons I gave above. I mean, it fails to properly display the concept of subjugation well for what it tries to be. I have seen subjugation porn that was more interesting than this, yet there was no story besides the girl keenly saying she wants to try something out of the usual and the next second she’s sweaty and teary in pleasure…. and pain…. perhaps even both. Even though I knew fully well that they wanted it, I find myself feeling bad for them. This, I felt nothing at all… besides the arousing sex scenes, they could as well have dumped all the scripting and setting in the trash for all I care.

If anyone actually knows a decent hentai with some of the qualities that I explained in this comment, please let me know. Would be very eager to check it out.